Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more environmentally and economically. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages.
food products are basically a necessity in one’s daily life. they are being imported from other countries to meet the end needs of residents. however, relying much on food imports could lead to disbalance in the economy. Even though its benefits will outweigh the negative aspect. this essay will discuss pros and cons of food imports.
Firstly, countries with extreme weather conditions, where it is cold most part of the year, relies on the import for the grains during winter. having said that, scarcity of food and grains due to this, needs to be fulfilled to meet the end needs by bringing food from other parts of the world. In winters, soil become damp and it is very hard to cultivate crops during that time. For instance, countries like Canada and most part of the Europe relies on the imports in winter. it is quintessential for these countries to maintain their stock in winters, which is only possible if they have proper system in place.
On the other hand, importing food discourages the consumption of local produce food, which, in the long run will hampers the agriculture sector. As, when people get habitual of convenience of importing food and grains then they less rely on the local produce. this, in turn, leads to decline in the countries gross domestic product from agriculture sector and economy disbalance. however, where it is not possible to produce enough to meet the end needs of the country, import could do miracles and will open the gates for diverse grains and option to explore internationally.
To recapitulate, economies with shortage of food grains have no option but to import the food. but where weather conditions are good, governments should encourage local food by putting extra custom duties on imports. having said that, benefits outweighs negatives to import food where country can not meet the requirement of its citizens.
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- Many foods are shipped from far away Some people think that eating local food is more environmentally and economically Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages 56
- Many foods are shipped from far away Some people think that eating local food is more environmentally and economically Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08306709265 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56274644957 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536741214058 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9512912342 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5882352941 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166758574144 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630404856752 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469010714081 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122578639553 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441362309438 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.