Some people prefer travelling alone when they experience a new country for culture, while others prefer having some company.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Since last centuries and till today travelling is still considered the most beautiful experience anyone can have. While some people enjoy travelling alone to learn about the culture of the country and discover its other part. Others believe that traveling with friends will have a positive impact on the group.
On the first hand, travelling alone have a lot of advantages. Firstly, you can follow your own schedule and decide what type of activities should be done. In fact, when you travel with a group you are obliged to follow their agenda. For instance, if you like to spend more time discovering the museum of that country this will not be possible when you are in a group. Secondly what is also considered important is sharing rooms with others. Most people don't like the share the same rooms and bathrooms to prevent any cleanness. Actually this will affect the person in a negative way knowing that he traveled to enjoy and have a good mood.
On the second-hand, we should also emphasis on the advantages of travelling with a companion. Starting with sharing information and discussing different point of views. This will not be feasible when travelling alone. Usually with the friends we share a good moments and we keep the best memories. Moreover, we should not forget that the purpose of the travel is not only to learn about the culture of the city Indeed, many of people travel to have fun and experience the night life of that city. When you travel with a group you can enjoy all the night activities.
Finally, although travelling alone will make you the leader of your trip and will decrease the tension if you don't agree with your companion one some activities. I still believe that travelling with group is more beneficial and will result in more joy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, while, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82410423453 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46515897553 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491856677524 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1112820509 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2777777778 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0555555556 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213915633357 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745434662593 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660888877505 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152251920009 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657763562991 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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