Some people like to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while others prefer to keep their private lives separate from their work lives Discuss both views and give your opinion

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1114, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...data-pwa-dictionary-word=', in turn,' class='pwa-mark pwa-mark-done&apo...
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Line 3, column 1172, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ...s;pwa-mark pwa-mark-done'>, in turn, spend free time together. As per t...
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Line 3, column 1790, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ne'>a couple of decades ago.
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Line 5, column 564, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... there is no harm in spending time with ones colleague, I believe in ^^^^
Line 5, column 1077, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...uld end up making an unjust decision in the cooperate life. For example, if a one is close to...
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Line 5, column 1131, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...life. For example, if a one is close to ones manager and they might have a friendly ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, may, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4367.0 1615.20841683 270% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 10.9448621554 5.12529762239 214% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 12.8744761927 2.80592935109 459% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516290726817 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1199.7 506.74238477 237% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 3.0 1.60771543086 187% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 261.5901785 49.4020404114 530% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 397.0 106.682146367 372% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 36.2727272727 20.7667163134 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2727272727 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.061854809466 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881994205346 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118186456433 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824984032363 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534854337832 0.056905535591 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 48.2 13.0946893788 368% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -83.5 50.2224549098 -166% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.9 11.3001002004 300% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 46.76 12.4159519038 377% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.61 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 78.4519038076 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 9.78957915832 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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