You have been invited to deliver a speech about your country at the international meeting at an American college. Write a letter to the secretary of the international community.
In your letter,
you should tell:accept invitation and suggest preferable dates
tell them what your talks will be about
and what equipment you require them to arrange.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter in regards to an invitation I received from your institute to give a speech about my country. I am humbly accept this invitation and looking forward to give an informative speech to the audiences. In fact, I have travel dates at this Month end, however I am flexible to re-schedule my travel dates to attend this occasion. I am available between 25th to 28th of this Month during morning hours. In my speech, I am planning to cover different topics related to History, Politics, Culture, Atmosphere of my country, however the most concentrated subject of my speech will be how young kids of my country is getting benefited from Governmental schemes for study.
For this speech, I am planning to show some of the presentation slides, so I will need Laptop, Speaker and a small table at the minimum. however if I get artificial robots, automatic car for showing to audience while I am giving my speech, that will be greatly appreciated.
Again, I would like to thank you and your institute to consider me to deliver a speech and I am eagerly looking forward for the day.
Yours Faithfully,
Joe Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 81, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...; I am writing this letter in regards to an invitation I received from your inst...
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Line 2, column 187, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'accepted'.
Suggestion: accepted
... a speech about my country. I am humbly accept this invitation and looking forward to ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...;For this speech, I am planning to show some of the presentation slides, so I will need Lap...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...eaker and a small table at the minimum. however if I get artificial robots, automatic c...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: however,
...eaker and a small table at the minimum. however if I get artificial robots, automatic c...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96818181818 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73974044135 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536363636364 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.9440583254 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.444444444 76.5299724578 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4444444444 16.8248392259 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108929166545 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586382258673 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395863867996 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738356110529 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447207597342 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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