The line chart above compares the number of old peoples who were 65 and over 65 years old from 1940 to 2040 in Japan, Sweden, and America.
It is clear from the chart that the three countries all had and will have more and more 65-and-over-year-old people. But only Japan’s old people tended to decrease in the early 100-year period and will jump rapidly at the end.
By 1940, Japan, Sweden, and the United States had a percentage of 5%, 7% and 9% of people aged 65 and over respectively. Over 20 years later, Sweden and the USA had the same pattern, rising up and reached 10% and 9% one by one while Japan figure fell to 3%. Whereas Japan kept moving unchangeable, USA climbed up with the same speed of Sweden to 15% and 14% in turn after 1980.
After that, America slightly went down, Sweden was up and Japan increased significantly. Experts predict that almost in 2040, all three countries will reach the highest points, particularly Japan will account for 27%, Sweden with 25% and the USA with 23% of people who will be 65 and over 65 years old.
This line graph illustrates the ratio of the elderly during a century in three different countries: japan, sweden and usa. Overall, the number of old people in all the countries have been increasing significantly.
In 1940, the percentage in japan was only 5%, while the percentage in sweden and usa were around 7% and 9%, respectively. The figure in japan dropped slightly to about 3% in 1960 then remained stable until 1980. Meanwhile, both the figures in sweden and usa rose moderately to about 15% in 1980. After that, whereas the elderly in sweden rose considerably, the number of old people in usa declined for a little bit.
Regarding future trends, it is predicted that the figure in japan will reach 10% in 2030, before it soars suddenly to around 27% in 2040. Anticipation shows that in 2030, the figure in sweden will fall slightly to nearly 20%, whilst the figure in usa rise over 15%. both the percentages in sweden and usa are expected to grow sharply.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 404, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...ber of old people in usa declined for a little bit. Regarding future trends, it is predic...
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Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Both
...whilst the figure in usa rise over 15%. both the percentages in sweden and usa are e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, then, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77976190476 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59577730309 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.5328292733 43.030603864 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.2222222222 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181450717272 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792367166244 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661063953401 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1360895973 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571461900775 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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