Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people nowadays don’t give enough time to helping their communities.
As per an article in times of India newspaper, contribution from yougster towards community services has recently declined. I completely agree to this fact and in the below paragraphs we will state my views.
Nowadays, universities and companies are encouraging their stakeholders to participate in community services, as well as, are organising several programs to benefit the community they co-exist in. However, despite their efforts there is a dip in the contribution of young people due to several reasons.
Main reason for the decline is, high competition in the market. First, young people are under immense pressure to stand out in their feild, as there are a lot others to competing to their position. Secondly, a lot of options available to choose post completion of the education. For instane, after completing masters people are doing several short duration courses such as data science cousre, data analysis, smart professional cource to get edge of other comptetors.
Another point contributing to the lack of young people support is, availablity of entertainment sources. In today's technologically acdvance age there are various social platforms for one to get engaged in. Youngster are addicted to social media and spent their maximum time on it. More option such as virtual gaming and online media service prodivers such as Play stations, Netflix, youtube, so on and so forth are popular amongst this generation.
To conclude, in my opinion, young generation are more distracted than ever from their resposibilities such as towards thier enviroment and community. Therefore, I agree to the argument that new generation contribution towards their community has significantly declined.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to post'
Suggestion: to post
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49621212121 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03803700563 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621212121212 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3116051554 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.642857143 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189455489234 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617679388398 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473235117061 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100389308915 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255017861835 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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