Some people say that a car is the best way to travel in cities while others believe a bicycle is a better way to commute.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
In urban area, people believe that car is the most prefered way to travel but many contradict by stating bicycle to be superior. In my opinion, bicycle is beneficial in terms of health, enviroment and saving and car can be more damaging to ones health and the nature.
Although, motor vehicles can be convenient and siutable for person who like to live a sedentary lifestyle. For instanse, people who wishes to move around less by giving difficulty to his body would prefer using car. Other options like electronic car could not a viable option as those car a significantly expensive for who wishes to purchase it.
Moreover, not only, usage of fossil-fuel powered vehicles could impact an individual's saving heavily, but realise harmful gases in the environment. This convenience could also lead to less body movement and cardivascular activities. Which endanger the persons health and well bieng.
On the other hand, usage of bicycle could be physically inconvenient but helps embrace the enviroment and support persons to gain fitness. This muclses powered machine would encourage saving and will never be a reason for road congestions
To conclude, i concur, with the ones who believe a bicyle to be a better option than a motor vehicle. As it is nature-frendly and low budget investment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12676056338 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83376019282 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615023474178 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8915603635 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2727272727 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147332377909 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524730492663 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677190170843 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765026690059 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711589638968 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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