One of the major problems that faces today’s governments is creating enough satisfactory housing for their increasing populations whilst still trying to protect the environment.
Discuss this statement and give your opinion.
The ever-growing population is a universal issue; as a result, governments across the world are struggling to meet the housing needs of their citizens. In my view, people should have options to choose their style of houses, but not at the cost of environmental destruction. This essay will discuss the exigency of this issue and plausible measures to tackle the dire straits.
To commence with, shelter is one of the basic needs of human beings, and it cannot be compromised. Governments across the world are exploring various options to meet not only the accommodations of people but also to provide them with their suitable choice of stay. Not every individual has the same taste and economic standard; hence, it is obvious for people to look for a home, based on their needs. For instance, a high achiever would not like to stay in the small one-bedroom living room, as he or she works hard to reach at this level and deserve a better lifestyle. This is how social structure can be maintained and people will aspire to be successful in order to better their living standards. On the flip side, building more houses as per people's needs, often come at the cost of deforestation, which directly affects the biodiversity of this world. Whilst, the real estate agencies are tirelessly building sprawling residences, they tend to ignore the environmental damage, and keep cutting woods deliberately. This is a pertinent issue and the government needs to strike a balance between needs to build residences for it’s' citizens and at the same time, keep the environment green and healthy.
Furthermore, leaders are not at the loss of options to tackle this immediate issue, there are some plausible remedies, which can be looked at. One of the solutions could be, building apartments vertically than horizontally. This way plenty of space can be saved without compromising on the quality of housing. To illustrate, If one 2 bedroom house requires 800 square feet of area, then 10 houses would need 8000 square feet at least. In contrast if the apartments are built vertically as a 10 storey building, only 800 square feet of the surface area are required. In addition, Colonies can be built in the barren lands, which will save our green jungles. These uncultivated areas are a good option for building skyscrapers, which will be a perfect solution to build an appropriate abode for people. For example, The Gujrat government in India built a whole new city in the “Kachh” desert. This kind of farsightedness of state government shows how to satisfy the shelter need for the citizen.
In conclusion, the need for affordable and suitable accommodation will only increase in the future. Hence, Leaders should be proactive and work with their bureaucrats to be ready with options, and they should not ignore the environmental well being. Human beings can only prosper if they respect nature and co-exist together.
- One of the major problems that faces today s governments is creating enough satisfactory housing for their increasing populations whilst still trying to protect the environment Discuss this statement and give your opinion 73
- One of the major problems that faces today s governments is creating enough satisfactory housing for their increasing populations whilst still trying to protect the environment Discuss this statement and give your opinion 56
- One of the major problems that faces today s governments is creating enough satisfactory housing for their increasing populations whilst still trying to protect the environment Discuss this statement and give your opinion 73
- One of the major problems that faces today s governments is creating enough satisfactory housing for their increasing populations whilst still trying to protect the environment Discuss this statement and give your opinion 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 342, Rule ID: OBVIOUS_FOR[1]
Message: The adjective obvious is normally used with 'to': 'obvious to people'.
Suggestion: obvious to people
...ste and economic standard; hence, it is obvious for people to look for a home, based on their need...
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Line 2, column 1127, Rule ID: FOR_ITS_NN[24]
Message: Did you mean 'for its citizens'?
Suggestion: for its citizens
...lance between needs to build residences for it’s citizens and at the same time, keep the environm...
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Line 2, column 1127, Rule ID: ABOUT_ITS_NN[25]
Message: Did you mean 'for its citizens'?
Suggestion: for its citizens
...lance between needs to build residences for it’s citizens and at the same time, keep the environm...
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Line 3, column 343, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'house' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'houses'.
Suggestion: houses
...ousing. To illustrate, If one 2 bedroom house requires 800 square feet of area, then ...
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Line 3, column 439, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...ould need 8000 square feet at least. In contrast if the apartments are built vertically ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, look, so, then, well, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2433.0 1615.20841683 151% => OK
No of words: 485.0 315.596192385 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01649484536 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83570451712 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 176.041082164 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529896907216 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 738.0 506.74238477 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2337973119 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.782608696 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0869565217 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26086956522 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161785881945 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492300356939 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318576259083 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103845488887 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395052697656 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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