People who go to live in other countries, should follow the customs and traditions of the new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Due to rapid increase in globalisation people are getting migrated to different places in the world. individuals who imigrated to various places again have to meet with different culture and tradition. I think, it totally depends upon an person to adapt to new customs or to continue their native country cultures. In my opinion it is not mandatory for one to follow new country tradition. I will explain my argument in the following passage.
On one hand, wherever people are living they are following their culture irrespective to their surroundings. many people love their own culture and traditions they are following from long time. Additionally, one will have respect towards their customs. So, for such people it will be difficult to accommodate to new traditions and leave their own practice. For example, Indians respect beef according to their tradition but Canadians eat it as their food. If you are staying in Canada because of your job you should not eat beef by forgetting your custom.
On the other hand, many people love to know about different cultures and traditions in other countries of the world. Indirectly, they love to travel various places to know about their routine and lifestyle. At the same time, every individual should show their respect towards local cultures. Indeed, moving to another country helps to make friends from different region. Also helps you to introduce your culture to your new friends and you to experience their culture.
After having considered all the above discussed points, we can finally draw a conclusion that one need to adjust to the new environment and new people at your new country. people should respect each others cultures and traditions wherever they are they should follow their culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, for example, i think, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11846689895 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63933544896 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519163763066 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9589786907 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.6111111111 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9444444444 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270356540936 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896109875926 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624917962376 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17770971295 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160802836994 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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