The pie chart below shows information about different types of pollutants entering in a particular area of ocean in 1997 and 2007
this pie chart analysts proportions of different types of contaminants discharging in a specific area of ocean in 1997 and 2007.
It is clear that in 1997, the amount of trash are in the majority and the figure of air pollution was the lowest. However, in 2007, most of pollutants are oil whereas the minority was agricultural runoff.
In 1997, trash is the most popular type of contaminant, at 42% but the figure of trash dropped nearly threefold to 15% in 2007. Comparatively, there was only 15% of oil in this area in 1997 then there was a significant increase in the percentage of oil, at 52% and become the largest amount of pollutant at the same time.
The figure of air pollution was only 3% and was the lowest rate in 1997. Meanwhile the data about sewage and agricultural runoff are 15% and 25% respectively. In 2007, the percentage of air pollution rose more than five times, at 15%. By contrast, both the figures of agricultural runoff and sewage decreased to 10% or below.
- Technologies have developed very fast in the past 100 years However some people think that technological process has brought negative effects on the humanity To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion 61
- Some people think that criminals should be given longer terms in prison so as to reduce the crime rate To what extent do you agree or disagree 52
- Many people argue that smoking should be banned due to its harmful effects on human health To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 61
- Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer Do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries but other people think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen at TV and the internet Discuss both opinions and give your own 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...trash are in the majority and the figure of air pollution was the lowest. However...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the pollutants') or simply say ''most pollutants''.
Suggestion: most of the pollutants; most pollutants
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Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...nly 3% and was the lowest rate in 1997. Meanwhile the data about sewage and agricultural ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, then, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66857142857 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79139201614 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525714285714 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8756425503 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7777777778 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255405283195 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112245520934 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980382231243 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186741023274 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114070630939 0.0819641961636 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.