Nowadays some buildings such as offices and schools have open space design instead of separate rooms Why is it so Do you think this is a positive or negative development

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Nowadays, some buildings such as offices and schools have open-space design instead of separate rooms. Why is it so? Do you think this is a positive or negative development

Submitted by Tijani on Tue, 02/18/2020 - 07:07

The growth and revolution impacting not only in people, but also in the places the work in, therefore the look of the offices and schools changed from separate rooms to open -space ,in this essay i will discuss why this changing, and what the pros and cons compared with before.

On one hand the development economic influx in the expensively of land and local offices specially in the cities, pushing people to minimize their owned area by choosing open space area instead of rooms, in addition allowing instruction of the local offices and building to realized in short time, using mounted materials, like aluminum and glass, in for the cost expenses it’s less compared with rooms, and also the design will assorted with modernity of the world.

On the other hand studies being shows that people work in open space are less stress, and more productivity unlike working in rooms, allowing staff seat next it each other, however some sector like bank and schools the subject of open area is also show transparency and clearness to clients, and break down the space between clients and company, remain other sectors that necessary to work in rooms like HR offices, MG.

Furthermore the open space area reflect negative ,by spreading contagious diseases, and showing less privacy in work while all people see what are other doing.

On my opinion the open space has positive and negative features equally, either in benefit sides of employer and employers, with the necessary for such department for close offices for same particular position.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... people, but also in the places the work in, therefore the look of the offices an...
^^
Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...anged from separate rooms to open -space ,in this essay i will discuss why this ch...
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Line 1, column 198, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ate rooms to open -space ,in this essay i will discuss why this changing, and wha...
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Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to open'
Suggestion: to open
...o minimize their owned area by choosing open space area instead of rooms, in additio...
^^^^
Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: IT_IS[22]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (short form of 'it is')?
Suggestion: its
...num and glass, in for the cost expenses it’s less compared with rooms, and also the ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 430, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'assort'
Suggestion: assort
...ed with rooms, and also the design will assorted with modernity of the world. On the ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 249, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'showed', 'shown'.
Suggestion: showed; shown
...chools the subject of open area is also show transparency and clearness to clients, ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...o work in rooms like HR offices, MG. Furthermore the open space area reflect negative ,b...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 49, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ore the open space area reflect negative ,by spreading contagious diseases, and sh...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, look, so, therefore, while, in addition, in short, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05836575875 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.390777498 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591439688716 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.795622815 49.4020404114 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 260.0 106.682146367 244% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.4 20.7667163134 248% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.2 7.06120827912 286% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244465128124 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123488431427 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389391644169 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123488431427 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389391644169 0.056905535591 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.1 13.0946893788 215% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.96 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... people, but also in the places the work in, therefore the look of the offices an...
^^
Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...anged from separate rooms to open -space ,in this essay i will discuss why this ch...
^^
Line 1, column 198, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ate rooms to open -space ,in this essay i will discuss why this changing, and wha...
^
Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to open'
Suggestion: to open
...o minimize their owned area by choosing open space area instead of rooms, in additio...
^^^^
Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: IT_IS[22]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (short form of 'it is')?
Suggestion: its
...num and glass, in for the cost expenses it’s less compared with rooms, and also the ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 430, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'assort'
Suggestion: assort
...ed with rooms, and also the design will assorted with modernity of the world. On the ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 249, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'showed', 'shown'.
Suggestion: showed; shown
...chools the subject of open area is also show transparency and clearness to clients, ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...o work in rooms like HR offices, MG. Furthermore the open space area reflect negative ,b...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 49, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ore the open space area reflect negative ,by spreading contagious diseases, and sh...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, look, so, therefore, while, in addition, in short, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05836575875 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.390777498 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591439688716 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.795622815 49.4020404114 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 260.0 106.682146367 244% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.4 20.7667163134 248% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.2 7.06120827912 286% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244465128124 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123488431427 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389391644169 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123488431427 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389391644169 0.056905535591 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.1 13.0946893788 215% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.96 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.