The bar charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.
The line chart below depicts the number of people who traveled to and went out of the UK in the period from 1979 to 1999. Besides, the bar chart shows five main countries where the British tourist visited.
It is clear that the number of tourists increased gradually and in 1999, France was the most interesting place for UK tourists.
Looking at the line graph, there existed 10 million foreign tourists traveled to the UK in 1979 and the number of local tourists who came from the UK was more than 2 million people. From 1979 to 1986, the number of tourists all raised gradually. But in the period from 1986 to 1999, the number of local tourists increased sharply and reached its peak of the period at 52 million people and the number of foreign tourists still increased gradually end up at nearly 28 million people.
The bar graph depicts the number of UK residents visited five popular countries. The most interesting place where tourists traveled to was France which had more than 10 million people came to in 1999. After France was Spain where contained 9 million tourists. And three other countries visited by the British were the USA, Greece, and Turkey where had just around 3 million people came for traveling.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'charts'.
Suggestion: charts
The line chart below depicts the number of people who ...
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Line 4, column 202, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...than 10 million people came to in 1999. After France was Spain where contained 9 mill...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, look, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71962616822 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28939536136 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453271028037 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6152069273 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212636336459 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105887222847 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804509832311 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156548742019 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553752702328 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.