Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
In the modern world today, shopping online is becoming more and more popular. People use it to buy many things such as books, clothes, shoes, tickets and even groceries. besides many advantages of shopping in this way, it also has many disadvantages.
First of all, the advantage of buying things on the internet is convenience. Whenever and wherever we are, in the city or in the countryside, we just need a smartphone or a laptop and we can buy all the things we want. Therefore, we don’t need to go out and the products will be sent to our place. we also can order a product for someone. it will save a lot of times and money. Moreover, we can search a product in many websites to find a suitable price. Finally, the evaluation of products on the internet is posted by the official companies so it is very accurate and comfortable.
On the other hand, shopping on the internet also has many bad things. Firstly, when we buy things online, we have to spend much times in front of smartphone’s screen, which is bad for our eyes. we will also have no interaction with the world outside, which decreases our communication skills and isolates us from society. One more thing is the quality of the product. besides many reliable websites on the internet, there are also many fake websites. we can buy these fake or spoiled goods from these webs. And last but not least, the online shopping also has danger with the financial security. Some websites don’t ensure about it or you have to pay the money before the good is delivered, which is unsafe.
In conclusion, shopping online has both advantages and disadvantages. Depending on what kind of products you buy, you can look for the most sensible way of buying it
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, look, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67213114754 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65001204279 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518032786885 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9155667418 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.25 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214705583813 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749008952542 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825178524104 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16447965529 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114676990627 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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