At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
In this modern society, many opportunities are being introduced to students so focusing only on academics is not the only option for students. Yes, academics are important but some students are not that good at it but they excel others in sports and social activities.
universities and colleges in my country only focus in classes and libraries so that they become the first in the country in education but it is not only the books are going to get the students who are the future of the country to face the real life with confidence. Here are some reasons why universities also should provide financial supports to sport and social activities to side by side with libraries.
Firstly, the options it opens to students who are not good at getting good marks in subjects like maths, science and others but than they take part in different sports and social activities like taking part in varieties of art, debate, quiz competitions and sports events where they can showcase their talents and win them for their college. In competitions like this many scouts of various teams who hire students with talents like this in bigger tournaments where they get to represent their country in the future. Amplous amount of students also can take part in musical shows where they can showcase their capabilities and from which they can profit and find a future for their life.
Secondly, students are more confident about themselves as a person in a whole as they get to chase their dreams in life. organization like universities and colleges are more concerned about enrolling more students with talents who are capable of getting their name of the organization to extraordinary heights in the business of education. Therefore, financial aid in sports and other social activities is as important as aiding in libraries. The skills provided by the organization get more likely to get the grads enrolled in big organization where the students perform well and make the name of the university more known to the outer world.
In the conclusion, financial support to extra curricular activities are as important as aiding in libraries as it can help students to get fruitous results after graduation.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is better to read books on an electronic device than it is to read traditional books on paper 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Universities
...hers in sports and social activities. universities and colleges in my country only focus i...
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Line 6, column 122, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Organization
...they get to chase their dreams in life. organization like universities and colleges are more...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72985141456 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445355191257 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 578.7 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.1406597722 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.5 100.406767564 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 20.6045352989 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203015988972 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937291489707 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931252743573 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137135213963 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694913273174 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 11.7677419355 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 58.1214874552 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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