Many people strive to maintain a successful career and happy family life at the same time. What problems can this situation create? What are the possible solutions?
Several individuals are endeavouring hard to maintain a balance between work and family life. This essay will first suggest that the biggest problem caused by this is the increase in stress level of people and then submit, adequate hiring and proper delegation of work by the employer as the most viable solution.
Employees struggle hard to give equal importance to both office work and family life, thus suffer from emence pressure, anxiety and mental issues. In other words, people get completely exhausted both physically and mentally which leads to breakdown of family and career. To elucidate, a recent study conducted by The National Institute Of Nerology found that more than 80 percent of people are suffering from some form of depression and over 60 percent of them mentioned blancing work-life balance as the main reason.
A possible solution of the aforementioned porblem is that emplpoyer should hire workforce depending on the work size and should ensure that there is proper delegation of work. This is to say, employing adequate number of mployees will assure equitable distribution of duties and responsibilities among employees. As a result, they will not only be able to complete the prjects within the deadline but will also be able to fulfil their family needs. To exemplify, one of my friend who continuously complained about the stress in managing job-life balance and was prescribed anti-depressants for the same, showed improvement when new hiring initiated and work load reduced
To conclude, individuals are facing a rise in stress levelsbecause of managing and giving equal priority to both career and loved ones. However, the problem can be tackled with the necessary steps taken by the employer by hiring sufficient employees and lowering the work load with proper delegation of work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, then, thus, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24742268041 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81688022198 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59793814433 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.4441284243 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.7 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141228531678 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580483750954 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284003740846 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878213714898 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309348797579 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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