The charts below show the percentage of people aged 23-65 in different occupations in one UK town (Ashby) and in the UK as a whole in 2008.
The pie chart compares the proportion of residents from 23 to 65 years old in the UK and part of it, namely Ashby, in the 2008 year.
Looking at the graph, it is immediately obvious that the unemployed rate in Ashby more than the national rate. Moreover, while British people generally preferred office work, personal service was the most popular job in Ashby.
As can be seen from three types of work: individual service, unemployment and office work, there wasn't a big difference between them. Details, the percentage of the jobless citizen in Ashby was 14%, whereas that recorded in the whole nation was only 10%. Similarly, the number of people worked in individual service also higher 4% than that of nationwide with data as above. Meanwhile, only having a very small discrepancy in the other two occupations. The proportion of person who employed in office work and shop work were 18% and 14% respectively, similar to that of the entire of England, with at 19% and 13% sequentially.
Regarding the remaining jobs, Ashby reported that 16% of people living here were construction workers, while the figure for the whole UK was 10%. By contrast, relating to professional work, 8% of Ashby residents did this type of business, compared to 14% of the population of the country. Lastly, the rest of the cake for the technical task, with 9% for Ashby and 17% for the UK, and this was also the largest difference in 7 kinds of profession.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...ce, unemployment and office work, there wasnt a big difference between them. Details,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, look, moreover, regarding, similarly, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 248.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8064516129 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68826747142 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 106.607317073 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596774193548 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.5144585436 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.363636364 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5454545455 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 5.23603664747 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159579494995 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571661831578 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059949181183 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102665311492 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602499895745 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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