The graphs below show the number of drivers in Britain who have been caught driving too fast by speed cameras placed on roads, and the number of people killed in road accidents, over an eight-year period since the introduction of speed cameras. The tables show the results of a survey of people’s opinion on the speed cameras.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
Write at at least 150 words
The graphs display the number of drivers in Britain who have been spotted exceeding the speed limit on speed cameras as well as the number of fatalities due to road accidents for an 8-year period since the installation of speed cameras on the roads.
Overall, even after the introduction of speed cameras, road accident fatalities number fluctuated in the same range over an eight-year period. Meanwhile, the number of speed limit violation fines kept on rising.
The tables give information about public’s thoughts regarding speed cameras. Turned out that 60% of the respondents believed that the cameras did not improve road safety at all whereas 32% of them believed it did.
Regarding the purposes of installment, 26% of the participant felt that the purpose is to enhance roads safety, while, 71% thought that it was for materialistic purposes, since the number of fatalities hasn’t decreased, but rather fluctuating between 3000 and 3500 lives lost in road accidents annually on the other hand, the number of fined drivers kept on rising until it spiked in the last two years reaching nearly 1.6 million fines. Moreover, 56% of the voters think that the number of cameras is redundant.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, regarding, well, whereas, while, as for, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15816326531 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66259570126 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612244897959 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.56995412 43.030603864 289% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.428571429 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1428571429 5.23603664747 232% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.467861386836 0.215688989381 217% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202418877571 0.103423049105 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151524810803 0.0843802449381 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287601036392 0.15604864568 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155729621261 0.0819641961636 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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