Many high street shops have gone out of business in recent years. Why do you think this has happened? Is it a positive or negative development?
Over the last few years great amount of boutiques in a commercial center have ceased their activities. The reason behind this trend is lack of cost recovery due to various factors. In my opinion, it is a positive development because goods that were sold in main street shops were expensive and were not affordable for an average person.
The main factor playing role in disappearance of high street shops is that the prices for the property in the business center of a city are going through the roof. As a result, business owners are not able to cover their expenses despite the fact that they mostly sell brands. In fact, average customers cannot afford them and tend to order products via the Internet because online-shops have significant variety of product as well as delivery and lower-prices. Consequently, modern boutiques become uncompetitive and business owners forced to close their high street shops and search for another way to fill a market niche.
From my perspective, this trend is advantageous for individuals and economy as a whole. First, switch to the Internet shopping means higher asset turnover which is beneficial for the economy. In terms of customers, clothes and other goods from the Internet shop have lower prices and wider variety. Thus, people are able to purchase something affordable and appealing to them. For example, I wanted to buy a new dress from natural fabric and I was not able to purchase it in ordinary shops because it was too expensive. Later I had ordered few dresses online and finally bought a gorgeous dress. I totally enjoyed by this experience, especially because it did not consume too much time and there was not need to go to a market or a mall.
In conclusion, having considered the reasons of shuttering of main street shops, I believe that it is a positive development. This is because processes of shopping became more comfortable and affordable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, if, so, thus, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97507788162 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75392227329 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566978193146 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7796635981 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8125 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191606455454 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587753809935 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397681148869 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125579488658 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352510379207 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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