If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
Regarding the lots of catastrophic matters surrounded my hometown, by too far, if I had sufficient power, I would absolutely change the leadership of my hometown. Although, my hometown has exceedingly come cross numerous difficulties, the chief problem that sequentially exacerbate our conditions is the deficiency and incapability of handling the hometown tasks. The defeat in managing and controlling the air pollution, the drastic trend of unemployment, the harsh situation of our economy, sanctions and even bringing about the simple happiness among the people are few examples of this issue. In this condition, the tact of leadership could dominate most of the unwanted problems but instead it goes in the way to be the catalyst of being worse. To elaborate more on the subject mentioned, the following reasons and examples will be presented.
First and foremost, I would refer to the great expression of legendary prime minister of the United Kingdom, Winston Churchill, poverty and bad situation of economy have only two main reasons, the leaders are fool or the fool people are leaders. This expression simply reveals the critical role of leadership in upgrading societies conditions. There is causal relation between the degree of upgrading a society on the one hand and the presence of qualified leaders on the other hand. A simple glance in the history evidences reveals the fact that the foundation of developed countries was strongly affected by powerful, tactful and smartest leaders and the chief reason of great civilizations downfall was the presence of incapable leaders accompanying their corruptions. As a result, the leadership in a hometown is a vital issue proving by historical evidences that should be changed if the situations go down into the cesspool of problems.
Another primary reason associated by deficiency of leadership is maintaining a society in the absurdity. The restriction of people in the closed area brings about the condition that the main part of people thing that there are no better conditions they experienced. They live in the heaven provided by the tact of their leaders and if they lose that foxy leaders, the society will be corrupted in the near future. This contemplation is commonly accepted in North Korea and Iran. Consequently, the bad leadership unquestionably grows the sense of absurdity that can be described as the worst thing in the society even in a vast society with great precedence or a small society like a hometown.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 680, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'civilizations'' or 'civilization's'?
Suggestion: civilizations'; civilization's
...t leaders and the chief reason of great civilizations downfall was the presence of incapable ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, regarding, so, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2094.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.235 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99848294976 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 12.0 3.08781362007 389% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.8317641391 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.6 100.406767564 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117288673318 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373776120649 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315733904948 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0781833672884 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346129023247 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 11.7677419355 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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