You are planing for a vacation and want your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter, you should:
• tell him/her why you want to take a vacation
• describe your plan
• invite him/her to go with you.
Dear Simmy,
How are you? Hope you are in radiant health and doing well in life. I really miss the time when we both were in same office, working with you was real fun, but after my transfer on promotion I was forced to move in different location.
You have notice that next month we are having holidays at starch for four days due to upcoming festival season. I really need a break from work so if we take 2 days off we can plan a wonderful trip together to any exotic location like Dubai or Singapore. I think Dubai will be better option as I has many things to enjoy and we can definitely have a adventure trip over their from desert safari to wonderful rides also the malls and location are beautiful to visit. Apart from this there are many thing for shopping also.
I have seen the ticket it will cast 40000 for the round trip and living accommodation can be booked online. We can leave from delhi on 23 of august i.e on Saturday night and can come back on 31st i.e on moday We will reach their on 24 of September i.e on Monday.
I am sure that you will love to come along with me and will avoid all the plans which you have made earlier. Hope to get the positive respond from you
Catch you up at Delhi airport
Lots of love
Mannu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
... think Dubai will be better option as I has many things to enjoy and we can definit...
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Line 3, column 348, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ngs to enjoy and we can definitely have a adventure trip over their from desert s...
^
Line 3, column 492, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'many things'.
Suggestion: many things
...ful to visit. Apart from this there are many thing for shopping also. I have seen the tic...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 497, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'things'?
Suggestion: things
...o visit. Apart from this there are many thing for shopping also. I have seen the tic...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 516, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... this there are many thing for shopping also. I have seen the ticket it will cast 4...
^^^^
Line 9, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... at Delhi airport Lots of love Mannu
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, well, apart from, as for, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.20833333333 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06532214329 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629166666667 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.9569115822 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8181818182 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 4.34317383033 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161508369033 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076921134348 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660592202101 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114958639482 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759174860848 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.14 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.