Nowadays a few people take their family with them to abroad whenever they go for a business trip. What are the advantages and disadvantages on them and on their family.
These days some prefer to take their family along while going on work related tours to various nations. As everything has pros and corns same is with this, accompanying family members have few merits as well as demerits, both will be discussed in essay further.
Considering the benefits of taking close ones on business trips. The predominant reason is relieve from work related stress. When a person is surrounded by loved ones, he will surely be more comfortable and enjoy the spare time in a better way, which will help to reduce the business tension. Apart from this family also get the chance to explore the world and learn variety of culture. If a person travel to different destination especially young children, it is definitely helpful to them in increasing intellectual reasoning and mental power.
On the other hand, the major drawback is lack of focus or concentration. Usually business trip are for economic growth of any organization and decision made while visiting another country have lasting effect on the brand image of the company, while spending time with family members person get distracted and some time make wrong choices. However, some time family member get annoyed because of less attention due to work related tasks and do not able to enjoy the trip with full enthusiasm.
In conclusion, unequivocally company of family on business trip have huge advantages but many times leads to untoward repercussions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 91, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'relieved'.
Suggestion: relieved
...siness trips. The predominant reason is relieve from work related stress. When a person...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, well, while, apart from, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12288135593 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68057625961 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661016949153 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5627577031 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.909090909 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4545454545 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36363636364 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235423001176 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076297242963 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549958805453 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138646427102 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382606005492 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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