One of your friends ask you to be a partner in his new business.
write a letter to reply him:
- give your opinion about your friend's business idea
- tell him weather or not you have decided to accept his offer
- and explain your reason for this decision
Dear john,
I was delighted with your letter as it has been so long talking to you. Hope everything is fine from your end. Felt so happy by hearing that you are going to start a new import and export business.
Really, it was a good idea to do it on vegetables and fruits. As you are staying in Malaysia and it is a best place for farming. Because, it has better temperatures and water availability. At the same time, as there are many lands with no facilities to do farming nearby you, we can utilise the road transportation even, which is readily available irrespective to the climate. However, I am interested to be a partner of your business. Indeed, I am also thinking to start some business in recent days and as you have offered me to be your partner, I thought why not to accept your proposal. It would be appreciated, if we start it as early as possible. I will keep my share of investment before you start the business as it will be helpful to improve utilities before achieving a good position.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours friendly,
Abc.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear john, I was delighted with your letter as it h...
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Line 2, column 199, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...start a new import and export business. Really, it was a good idea to do it on v...
^^^
Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...s you are staying in Malaysia and it is a best place for farming. Because, it has...
^
Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours friendly, Abc.
^^^
Line 6, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...earing from you soon. Yours friendly, Abc.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4923857868 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70897683447 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629441624365 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4315451919 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0769230769 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1538461538 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301482696599 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10040931197 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083104655591 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164775559277 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789635228198 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.17 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.