Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
living as a foreigner in abroad countries requires us to communicate with foreign languages. Many people believe that this requirement causes us some threats, both social and daily life. In my point of view, i espouse this concept with several reasons.
Firstly, we will be unable to socialize with the society. As we know, we are social creatures, and this means that we should have the ability to blend in with the society. we should accomplish our main task as foreigners elegantly. when we are not professional in using foreign languages, we will struggling to interact with society. lack of socialization will have a dreadful impact to our mental. Majority of people living abroad will find that lacking in conversations will be an inhibitor to their life. They will have and ascending chance to undergo character changes and most of them will end up being an introvert. thus, language is an imperative for someone who is planning to live in abroad countries.
Secondly, we will not be able to endure our daily life. when we can not communicate with an array of languages, will not stand a chance to complete our life in bustling metropolitan cities. we can not even do the simplest things such as; shopping and using the bus. To illustrate, an employee can not coordinate with friends and compete with rivals. Moreover, a student can not understand lessons, especially the abstruse ones, with a good foundation of language ability. thus, communication skill is an imperative to be a successful foreigner.
In conclusion, language ability is the main factor to obtain our ideal life. lacking in this indispensable key of living will be an inhibitor for us. In my opinion, we should be resilient foreigners, and we should nurture our language skill, in order to utilizes it in our daily life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Living
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...al and daily life. In my point of view, i espouse this concept with several reaso...
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...e ability to blend in with the society. we should accomplish our main task as fore...
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... our main task as foreigners elegantly. when we are not professional in using foreig...
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Suggestion: Lacking
...e main factor to obtain our ideal life. lacking in this indispensable key of living wi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tor to obtain our ideal life. lacking in this indispensable key of living will be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, as for, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9603960396 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86096928456 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508250825083 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4777449942 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.15 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.15 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103184854602 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405023370183 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312225654544 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722561625617 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225741930339 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Living
living as a foreigner in abroad countries requ...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 209, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...al and daily life. In my point of view, i espouse this concept with several reaso...
^
Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...e ability to blend in with the society. we should accomplish our main task as fore...
^^
Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
... our main task as foreigners elegantly. when we are not professional in using foreig...
^^^^
Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'struggle'
Suggestion: struggle
...nal in using foreign languages, we will struggling to interact with society. lack of socia...
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Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lack
...ll struggling to interact with society. lack of socialization will have a dreadful i...
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Line 3, column 623, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...of them will end up being an introvert. thus, language is an imperative for someone ...
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...l not be able to endure our daily life. when we can not communicate with an array o...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o endure our daily life. when we can not communicate with an array of languages, ...
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Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...r life in bustling metropolitan cities. we can not even do the simplest things suc...
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Line 5, column 474, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
... a good foundation of language ability. thus, communication skill is an imperative t...
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Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lacking
...e main factor to obtain our ideal life. lacking in this indispensable key of living wi...
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Line 7, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tor to obtain our ideal life. lacking in this indispensable key of living will be...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, as for, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9603960396 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86096928456 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508250825083 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4777449942 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.15 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.15 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103184854602 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405023370183 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312225654544 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722561625617 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225741930339 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.