The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100000 people asking if they travelled abroad for the period 1994- 1998. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.
The given table illustrates the purposes of British inhabitant goes oversea between 1994 to 1998 and their
destination.
As is revealed from the first table, overall, it is obvious that the main purpose of travelling abroad among UK
residents was for relaxation, meanwhile the number of British people going overseas for unspecific reasons
was the lowest. It is also clear from the second table that Western Europe was the most favorable destination
among the three surveyed areas.
To be more specific, in 1994, there were more than fifty thousand English traveling abroad for holiday,
approximately five-fold higher than the number of people going for business in the same year. This figure
decreased slightly by 1 000 people after one year before experiencing a gradual increase to over 20 000
during the next three years. Similarly, one in ten of surveyed people responded that visiting friends and
relatives was the main purpose of their overseas travelling in the first year. This number inconsiderably
decreased by 60 people in 1995 and then witnessed a growth to more than 3 000 people in the last year.
Besides, residents travelling to a foreign country for work in UK rose steadily/ moderately by nearly 1 000
people while the figure for those going for unspecific reasons almost remained unchanged/ stable throughout
the time frame, at around 1 000 travellers.
Turning to the second table, standing at 19 000 people in 1994, the number of visitors to Western Europe
showed a significant decline to 18 944 people one year later before increasing again to nearly 25 000 people
till the last year. Following the same trend, the number of British travellers to other areas dropped from 1 782
in 1994 to 1 752 in 1995, and finally experiencing a growth of 700 people.
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- It has been said that people who read for pleasure have more developed imaginations and better language skills than people who prefer to watch TV Do you agree or disagree 67
- Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- It has been said that people who read for pleasure have more developed imaginations and better language skills than people who prefer to watch TV Do you agree or disagree 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, if, second, similarly, so, then, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 965.302439024 157% => OK
No of words: 297.0 196.424390244 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08754208754 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68658175898 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 106.607317073 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521885521886 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 283.868780488 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.8675761625 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.1 112.824112599 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 5.23603664747 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 3.83414634146 469% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195870945906 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821287324396 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279445728673 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614511963476 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235086896863 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 40.7170731707 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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