the postin of women in society has chanded markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problem young people now experience,such as juvinile deliquency,arise from the fact that many mareried women now work and are not at home to care for their children.to what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion
In recant time,it is being obsreved that most of youger children are facing problem related to "juvinile deliquency" because the role plays by mothers has totally changed .Infact,it is also consider that most of women in societies are working on higer job position due to which they do not have too-much time to catter their own childrewn.I completely agree with this secanrio.
To commence with,the role of women in society is totally different as it campares with traditional culture due to which children are not getting their "real love" by their parents in order worlds they are isolated from their mother parent because of jobs and facing the huge problem like "Juvenile delinquency" which will affect their whole future life. Sometimes, it is quite natural with mother parents to occupied in their professional work and in that case father parents must support their wife to catter their children. So that children cannot trapped in suich problem like drug addiction,crime loanliness hence,taking care of their children are not responsibility of a single parents.
In opposite side, I would like to add some more points to support my essay. firstly. thesedays caring their children is only the responsibility of women in their family because mothers are well aware about the likes and dislikes of their offspring in comparative to fathers knowing And if mother do not spend some time with their children then it is more likely that one can easily attracted towards unconventional activities such as drug addiction ,crime etc.Moreover, in extreme cases it will result in death. So it is important for parents to hold "Eagle eye" on them. So they cannot show their intrest in this field.
To conclude. The essay has been discussed all the relevant aspects of the problem However, according to my perspective. It should compulsory for parents To create friendly environment in homes so that children can share all things with them.
- the postin of women in society has chanded markedly in the last twenty years Many of the problem young people now experience such as juvinile deliquency arise from the fact that many mareried women now work and are not at home to care for their children t 67
- Some people believe that for a hobby to be enjoyable It should be hard to acquire or learn do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25552050473 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93413382432 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564668769716 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 141.3813786 49.4020404114 286% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 166.6 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172995986334 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615052841187 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441009668425 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107409760462 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295977688261 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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