Some people think that they can be fit by going to gym, while other think that there are other better way to remain fit.
Discuss both the views with your opinion.
Due to our sedentary lifestyle, doing some form of physical activities is of paramount importance. Certain section of people are of the opinion that going to the gym helps in maintaining fitness. While another school of though opine that there are alternate and better ways to stay fit. This essay shall discuss both sides and give an opinion.
To begin with, a gym has all the necessary equipment needed to achieve complete workout of the body. In other words it is a one stop shop for all your fitness needs. Secondly, many gyms have a trainer, who, is has expertise in this field, and is there to make sure that you obtain maximum benefit for your body along with causing minimum damage. For instance, exercising only one area of the body can be extremely dangerous as it can result in a tissue tear or other serious injuries. In such scenarios, one can working out with a gym trainer will space out the schedule and ensure that equal attention is given to all the parts of the body. Therefore, working out in a gym can prove to be highly beneficial because they have professional help and tools.
Conversely, while going to a gym is certainly helpful, not everybody might have access to it. Here, indulging in any outdoor activities such as playing a sport or even as simple as going for a walk can be considered as physical fitness. Furthermore, since most people spend their time indoors, just being in the open air instantly changes the mood. Being outside with nature also helps in maintaining our lungs as we are not inhaling the same recycled air conditioned air. According to a recent study, swimming is an activity that not only involves complete movement of the body but also helps in the lungs to function better. Thus, being outdoors provide a holistic fitness instead of just physical.
Keeping all the aforementioned points in mind, I believe there are other different mediums to stay fit than just the gym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75595238095 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53880735789 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7979027096 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7647058824 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11764705882 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328021206843 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931564741799 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463996981486 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182379674938 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402369877368 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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