Some people think that they can be fit by going to gym, while other think that there are other better way to remain fit.
Discuss both the views with your opinion.
Many people believe that the best way to keep themselves in shape is by exercising at the gym, whereas some opine that there are other good alternatives as well. This essay agrees with the latter assertion as they have also been found successful. The following paragraphs of this essay will discuss both points of view.
On the one hand, an important reason to support other forms of fitness exercises is due to their effectiveness. The alternative forms of exercise include yoga, running, and Zumba. These are designed in a way to inhale plenty of oxygen, which rejuvenates and replenishes dead cells in the body and helps to form new. This helps to regulate blood pressure, lowers cholesterol, and reduces the chances of heart diseases. For example, all countries now celebrate international yoga day because it has helped millions of people worldwide to combat chronic diseases such as cancer and heart attack.
On the other hand, people favor the gym for the availability of advanced machinery. Due to the advancement in technology, various machines have been developed to focus on each body part separately, which allows people to focus on their weak ligaments to strengthen them. However, because of the complexity involved in these machines and intense efforts required daily, many people stop doing it after a few days and fail to see any health improvement. To illustrate, as per a recent article published in a health magazine, reported that a substantial 40% of people see no gain as they discontinue gym workout because of the intense efforts involved.
To recapitulate, there are a plethora of alternative forms of exercise other than the gym that are highly efficient and have benefited numerous patients throughout the world to help cure many deadly diseases. People can take their benefits if they dislike doing hard exercises at the gym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, well, whereas, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14098360656 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78544996792 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596721311475 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6910865411 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194268731925 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065526462927 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521460421318 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11760294682 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455844757746 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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