Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can government do to reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is a robust reciprocal relation between human and rubbish. If there was no human, there would not be much rubbishes to contaminate the mother nature. There are various causes of propagating rubbishes and obviously some conducive conciliation to get rid from this. In this following easy I will scrutinize the reason behind it and the duty of governments to scares this threat.
To begin with, the first and foremost reason behind prolonging rubbishes is dust of factories. People are building new and new factories to produce goods for general masses and to make these products farms are creating rubbishes which making the environment malicious. Studies found that, the area which contains most number of factories and farms is much polluted.
Another reason is unconscious people. The inhabitant are not enough aware about atmosphere. They are throughing their garbages here and there, thus rubbishes are increasing.
These problems, however, can be crippled by some conducive approaches of bureaucrats. The charging authorities can not stop this shorts of problem but can take few steps to reduce this issue. Firstly, government can commence a campaign for making people acquainte with the drawbacks of this problem. To campaigning, the bureaucrats can select several ways, such as, advertising about this on TV and newspapers as well as distributing leaflets to the schools and colleges.
The authorities can also make a legislation and punishment for those factories and farms to diminish their garbage. The owner of these factories can be forced to recycle their rubbishes.
By the way of conclusion, though factories are producing rubbishes but it is because of human need. So, ir simply can not be stopped but can be reduced by the helping of governments and individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... there was no human, there would not be much rubbishes to contaminate the mother nat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, thus, well, such as, as well as, by the way, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31228070175 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88450931137 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582456140351 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.352448223 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1111111111 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200173412312 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609856163032 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341794691487 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994170930036 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385159571477 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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