A friend has agreed to look after your six-year-old son, house and pet while you are working abroad for two weeks.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• give instructions about your son with his everyday school routine
• give instructions about how to care for your pet
• give instructions about other household duties
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear .....................,
Dear John,
Thank you, for accepting my request for taking care of my child, a dog, and my lovely house while I am away to Brazil for an official conference. I'm writing this to tell you about an important to-do list to work on.
My son doesn't need any special assistance in preparing for the breakfast, but you can help him in Maths on his assignments. In addition, you can help him prepare lunch and supper. You can drop him for school while going to your office at 8:00 a.m.
Jannet, my dog, she used to walk up early and like to stroll in the park every morning. You can put in the grain biscuits which are in the kitchen in a central drawer to her bowl near stairs that go to the basement. She loves to take a bath every alternate day if you can manage to keep her schedule up and running, it will be great.
Do you still love gardening? I have got some amazing flower pots in the backyard and they need watering every Thursday, but don't put them in direct sunlight as they will die.
See you soon and let me know if you need anything from Brazil.
Take Care
Apoorva
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...y to Brazil for an official conference. Im writing this to tell you about an impor...
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Line 9, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...t to-do list to work on. My son doesnt need any special assistance in preparin...
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Line 17, column 125, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... they need watering every Thursday, but dont put them in direct sunlight as they wil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42233009709 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16666424975 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660194174757 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9570063088 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8181818182 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128712738644 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457784905937 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399743097229 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0643182873395 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05215072694 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.