Online shopping is increasing significantly. What the effect might be on the environment and the types of job which were required.
Give your knowledge and experience.
echnology has highly developed over the past decade. It is fully applied in the online shopping field which does cause certain effects on the environment and job distribution trend now.
Shopping online has impacted both positively and negatively on the environment. Firstly, the benefit of shopping online in the environment is to reduce air pollution. Since every process is accomplished by the Internet, shoppers tend not to go to the store on their vehicles. This act helps cut off the gas emission which contributes to the greenhouse effect. Moreover, an online store does not need to look like a real store full of fabulous decorations and visible position. Employers may not destroy the building to remodel on the purpose of suiting the concepts of the shop which also limits the pollution, noise and building materials. Secondly, the drawback related to the environment is the increase in packaging demand which leads to high plastic consumption. This trend will deteriorate the life's quality of every kind of animal on Earth.
On the time online stores were born, it has gradually restructured the job distributions in the labor market. On one hand, it minimizes the workload and creates many chances for jobs relating to the technology and shipment such as IT, web designer, page manager, shipper, etc. On the other hand, online shopping is responsible for laying off the workforce who directly manage the shop like shop workers and sales force.
To sum up, although online stores contribute to plastic overconsumption and some specific majors's unemployed, shopping online is a huge convenient idea but also an environmentally-friendly solution for air pollution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Echnology
echnology has highly developed over the past deca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, kind of, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25746268657 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06410994753 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600746268657 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9176184282 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.642857143 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231605158604 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778300540896 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062632296952 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139958900053 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413666859527 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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