If you could meet any famous person, living or dead, who would you choose to meet? What would you tell him/her? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Meeting a celebrity has always been a craze among public and normal people do not let any chance go by of meeting any famous person. If I would get any chance to meet any known personality, I would certainly meet Daniel Jacob Radcliffe. He started his career as a child artist, working in every part of Harry Potter series. I feel like meeting this celebrity for some special reasons that I will be explaining in the following essay.
First of all, his previous films have become popular in every country and now he has become an international actor. It would actually be a honour for me to take his autograph and have a picture with him. Secondly, he is a fan of India and it`s celebrities. I belong from India and give a huge respect to those well-known people, who respect my country. Last but not the least, there are many things that are similar between him and me, like we both are cricket fans and we both love the famous Indian cricketer, Sachin Tendulkar. I still remember how I used to cut his photographs from newspaper, magazines and daily used to stalk his social media accounts. I even tried sending him a few messages, if in case I get a reply.I always remembered his birthday and sometimes celebrated his birthday with my friends.Along with this I have even kept some of the gifts for him ,when I was young ,just in case I would get a chance to meet him, then I will give him those presents.
If I would meet Daniel Radcliffe on any day, I have already pre-planned what I will be asking him. I will very first take his autograph and would take a photograph with him, which will always remind me of him in the future. Then I will present some flowers to him, followed by an Indian snack, which I will be making on my own. I will first ask about his address and then request him to accept my requests on all social media accounts. After this, I will try to get an idea on how many films he is presently working on, how much he earns and will discuss about his likes and dislikes. Followed by this, I will try to enquire more about his family, friends, recent arguments etc. I will even write a letter, which will explain how desperate I was to meet him, and will hand it to him before leaving. Finally I will request him to give me his phone number and come to my home and have a dinner with my family and I.
To sum up, it has always been my greatest desire to meet Daniel Radcliffe, person who made my childhood and teenage awesome by his films. I am looking forward to meet this international celebrity soon and explore more about his interests regarding India.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, as to, i feel, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 88.0 43.0788530466 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2113.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 480.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40208333333 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43701829286 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48125 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 673.2 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2688491964 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.619047619 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2380952381 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163094352746 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601859862875 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645245732825 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124114337605 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602828103468 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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