You want to apply for work permit in a city abroad where you had never been to. Hence, you want to seek information about that city from a friend who is living in that city.
Write a letter to your friend to request information about the city you are planning to move to and in your letter, write the following:
• Where and when you want to work
• What type of job it is
• For how long you want to work there
Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you well in good health and spirits. It’s been quite long that I couldn’t write to you, Well, I have good news for you that I am planning to apply for a work permit for Saskatchewan, Canada. Therefore, I am looking for some important information, such as weather conditions in the city, job opportunities, and availability of rented accommodation nearby downtown. I will be there in the first week of April 2020.
Let me explain it in more details, recently, I have completed 10 years in the software developed field and planning to move abroad to enhance my career. My application for the work permit is under process and meanwhile, I would like to know about the job opportunities for experienced software engineers. I would really appreciate if you could provide me the list of Software Company in your city. I am also quite worried about the accommodation in the city. Could you please let me know the average monthly rent for the apartment?
I think I will get the work permit visa for two years for Saskatchewan province. After that, I will apply for the permanent residence category for Canada. I hope everything would work as per my plan. I hope we will have great fun together.
Take care and see you soon.
Yours truly,
Vishal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd see you soon. Yours truly, Vishal
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, really, so, therefore, well, while, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1073.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79017857143 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80822733845 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589285714286 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 329.4 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6166866644 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5333333333 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9333333333 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223716582439 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073744696863 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628085014279 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137710086376 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417066525099 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.