Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
There are a variety of songs out there which interest to people of all the age groups and places. However, I partially disagree with the statement because youngsters have entirely different taste in music. This essay will discuss both the sides with the relevant ideas and supporting examples.
There is no doubt that around the world music has become a way to ease out the stress and frustration, despite the lyrics are in a foreign language. It is evident that it doesn’t concern people where the tune is originated from. Like, in India, people are inclined to listen to the English songs, moreover, it is played in family functions and other occasions. Therefore, brings the sense of cultural value amongst the non natives.
On the other hand, due to the generation gap, the majority of the teenagers and adults are tempted to loud electronic sounds, whereas, elderly find the same track repulsive to their ears. School and college students generally create a band in which drums and guitar are played. Senior citizens find classical and instrumental beats relatively soothing. For instance, a survey conducted in the UK showed that 96% of the people above 40 enjoy slow sounds. As a result, young people do not like to be the part of the older people’s parties and refrain from any sort of participation.
In a nutshell, the melodies are always rejuvenating to everyone, it doesn’t matter where it comes from, but it draws the line where certain age group has to choose the kind of melody they find fascinating.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, as to, for instance, kind of, no doubt, sort of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93410852713 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60867686774 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651162790698 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2195736809 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9230769231 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218871187015 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639706865706 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047677871553 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113130667522 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643529212496 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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