The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Today, In The society everywhere from childhood child is tranied to compete with each anothor and he was trained to always win. Todays young people need to learn how to work cooperatively with collegues, neighbours, relatives, workers, etc.So by working cooperatively is good way rather than compitition.
Young peoples have anthor level of energy and they have enough physical and mental support with thier body. They can achive whatever he wants by working hard.Todays world if this youth has sence of work with each another is more necessary if they are working together and understand the view of another guy and both try to fulfill each others requirement and finding pros. and cons. in their argument is more necessary.
Today in each field people likes government officers, industry experts or any other manager, employee, worker need to work cooperatively. Like govenment officer need to take suggestion from his collegues, or seniors. Before taking any action he need to agree their co-officers.
In every branch cooperation is good thing but some drawbacks are there likes, If there is no competition then possibility of working hard and some little selfishness which is good sometimes is can be lost.
So,Finally we can conclude that working cooperatively is good for the young people and satisfication in eachother can fulfilled by this cooperation if they compete in same direction than there is loss of time only.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 2235.4752809 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 231.0 442.535393258 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23376623377 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82057139966 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.4932671777 125% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 704.065955056 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.5118691165 60.3974514979 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.9 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 5.21951772744 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154918876963 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514416416865 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575722597853 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841800672738 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391814567115 0.0667264976115 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.