A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
request advise about a gift for his/her family
ask about activities and clothing in his/her country
find out about the food
Dear Betty,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing to inform you that I will be visiting Florida next week. My flight is on 16th April 2020.
I need some advice on a few things. Firstly, I wish to purchase some gifts for your family but I am clueless of their preferences. I know you love shawls so I already have them packed, and I would love to know what Monica and Archie like the most.
I would also be interested in the activities of your city such as popular destinations, museums, art exhibitions and clubs. Although I have done some research over the internet and found that summer clothings will be sufficient but your suggestions on the matter will be highly appreciated.
Lastly, as you are well aware of how I adore a variety cuisines, please prepare a list of restaurants that we can visit.
I am eagerly looking forward to visiting you and your family.
Yours sincerely
Mary Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Betty, Hope you are doing well. I am writing to...
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Line 13, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you and your family. Yours sincerely Mary Smith
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 731.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6858974359 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55327038871 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679487179487 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5526639196 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.4545454545 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1818181818 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250104483741 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982465860122 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641352691636 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136135388696 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608855602421 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.