What should you do to contribute to keeping our neighbourhood green and clean? Write a paragraph answering this question.
Man is known for his wonderful world but the adjective '‘wonderful’' is fast being reduced to a barren and unclean world thanks to the hyper destructive actions of Man. Everyone loves to stay in a clean and pollution-free environment. It is our responsibility to keep our neighbourhood neat because this will help us live healthily. There are many we can do to keep our surroundings clean since every household generates wastes. We should avoid throwing the trash everywhere. Garbage pollutes our environment, especially plastic bags. We need to be eco-friendly by using containers that can recycle like paper or jute bags instead of plastic bags. We have witnessed the sorry plight of Australia where vast stretches of forests are burning. We should, therefore, encourage people by planting trees and plants to make our environment more beautiful. Plants can help in cleaning the air; having them in the house will reduce indoor pollution by more than half. Since we live in society, and we are part of the environment, we have the moral responsibility to contribute to a clean environment. Everyone keeps on complaining about how other people are polluting the situation without taking any corrective measures. Most of the time, we also pollute the environment by engaging in several activities like littering. As change agents, we need to set a good example by using dustbins and burning waste to keep our environment clean. Proper use of water is equally essential since water is the most critical resource. Proper usage and storage of water will help have enough to use. Excess or deficit of water is harmful, waterlogging around the houses can result in disease because mosquitoes will breed, causing malaria and other deadly diseases. Reuse products whenever you can, manufacturers use a lot of materials when packaging; hence we end up with many waste products, instead of throwing some of the items used for packaging we can try reusing them. For instance, boxes used for packaging can use for storage. If only we can be creative, you will be surprised to know many ways of reusing items that you thought were trash. Be conscious people, to protect yourself and the people around you.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 740, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... vast stretches of forests are burning. We should, therefore, encourage people by ...
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Line 1, column 1889, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...any waste products, instead of throwing some of the items used for packaging we can try reu...
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Line 1, column 2113, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
... ways of reusing items that you thought were trash. Be conscious people, to protect ...
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Line 1, column 2170, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...nscious people, to protect yourself and the people around you.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04958677686 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86573152696 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584022038567 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.781033323 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2857142857 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139374819484 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466801868072 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553078869801 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139374819484 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.