Some people believe that it would be beneficial if employees worked three or four days per week rather than five or six days. Why is this? Five reasons for your answers.
It is undoubted that working three or four days per week will be useful for employees in term of many different fields than five or six days.
More and more employees work hard to make sure that the process finishes on time, so they even have to work over time. This can make some negative effects on their’s health. Therefore, employee’s schedule need to be reduced a half to assure that their’s health is well. By this way, many people will have time to have a rest for a short spell. For example, many people spend their whole life working to earn money for their family, they do not care about their’s health. Until they have a disease, they feel regret but there is no way. In the day-off, they can have time to look after themselves and prepare for next week.
Besides, employees will have more time for their families. When working overtime, they do not have time to take care of themselves and their families. However, working a half week, they can do their household chores and look after the children. For instance, Woman can have time to prepare for dinner, their family will have warm atmosphere together. They also spend time helping the children to do their homework. Moreover, employees can visit their’s neighbor or their’s parents in the day-off.
In conclusion, employees should work a half week to ensure that their health is well, and can spend more time on their family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...will be useful for employees in term of many different fields than five or six days. More and...
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Message: Did you mean 'their' or 'theirs'?
Suggestion: their; theirs
... This can make some negative effects on their’s health. Therefore, employee’s schedule ...
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Message: Did you mean 'their' or 'theirs'?
Suggestion: their; theirs
...eed to be reduced a half to assure that their’s health is well. By this way, many peopl...
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Line 2, column 455, Rule ID: YOUR_S[1]
Message: Did you mean 'their' or 'theirs'?
Suggestion: their; theirs
...or their family, they do not care about their’s health. Until they have a disease, they...
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Message: Did you mean 'their' or 'theirs'?
Suggestion: their; theirs
...homework. Moreover, employees can visit their’s neighbor or their’s parents in the day-...
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Message: Did you mean 'their' or 'theirs'?
Suggestion: their; theirs
...employees can visit their’s neighbor or their’s parents in the day-off. In conclusion...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76016260163 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29539495365 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512195121951 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.0 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1656263063 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.0666666667 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192243707424 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832430327366 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952423389508 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178310829513 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142784080566 0.056905535591 251% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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