People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some opinions claim that people who emigrate from their homeland to resettle in a new country should follow traditions and behaviours of native communities. I completely agree with this idea.
It is apparent that newcomers would confront with many difficulties if they are not similar to native inhabitants. Firstly, in most communities people trend to live in harmony with familiar ones, and therefore, it is difficult to have a stable life if we always express strange behaviours. For example, if we need supporters who can help us in daily activities such as building our houses, we can get a sense of frustration since nobody intend to help weird neighbours who they have a downfall of conversation. Secondly, some particular governments impose official bans on some activities which are normal with you. Running a business regarding to gum in Singapore is a case in point. In 1992, this country’s government banned on chewing gum and violators can be tough on crime and even deal with a custodial sentence.
Nevertheless, if newcomers minic indigenous traditions and customs, they would get many benefits from native communities. From a perspective of economy, immersing in the indigenous values enables newcomers to deeply understand demands and expectations of native community, and therefore, they can make the most of traditional values and customs of inhabitants to grow their businesses. Furthermore, we can enjoy a wide range of fantastic traditional activities with hospitable native people. Each community have many festivals and traditional customs which obviously facilitate new relationships and even eliminate breakdowns in conversation.
In conclution, I totally agree that people who intend to dwell in a new location should try to get accustomed to indigenous codes of conduct so that they will have a better life in other countries rather than those who always set in their ways.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 437, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'nobody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'intends'.
Suggestion: intends
...get a sense of frustration since nobody intend to help weird neighbours who they have ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34219269103 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10236037633 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568106312292 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1538461538 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.692307692 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174946725006 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604884260965 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649033397273 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131537745093 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717937679211 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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