3. Many people think that every individual is responsible for their happiness, but some people believe there are other external factors that influence us. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The question of whether a joyful life depends completely on each individual or countless outer elements has always sparked heated debate. I vehemently disagree with the belief that one holds the responsibility for their own rapture, and I will state my opinion below to support my argument.
To begin with, It is claimed that economic plays as a pivotal constituent of a merry life. This is because the well-off have the financial capacity to fulfill their desires, and the frequency of confining to such boundaries while purchasing items tends to diminish. It is utterly incontrovertible that they have high social status and gain great respects from society, which are regarded as the ab extra contributions to their feelings of bliss. In contrast, take those in the middle class into consideration, the increasing high living expenses followed by a burgeoning number of tax payments pose a financial burden on lower-class workers, preventing them from getting better accommodations and favorable medical treatments; therefore, high level of anxiety and extreme dissatisfaction are inevitable. Seen in this light, it is incoherent to claim that happiness is independent of external factors.
Secondly, healthiness and interpersonal relationships are also means of defining happiness. A state of good health enables people to participate in a wide range of outdoor activities to avoid a sedentary lifestyle, which contributes to a great feeling of contentment. Moreover, It is apparently easier for one to overcome hardships and lead a pleasant life when he usually engages in verbal communication with his family or immediate social circle than he is in isolation. This is because laughing, playing or spending time with them could help him to forget about current distress, worries and disappointments, leading to a much more optimistic outlook for life.
From the arguments given, I firmly believe that despite one might accounts for his so-called joyfulness, It is the external factor that initially defines a happy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
The question of whether a joyful life depends completely on eac...
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Line 15, column 10, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'arguments'' or 'argument's'?
Suggestion: arguments'; argument's
...ptimistic outlook for life. From the arguments given, I firmly believe that despite on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47318611987 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1667870843 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652996845426 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.3865646324 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.583333333 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4166666667 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118036651065 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385223110077 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390583631255 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764642817184 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356202867164 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.5 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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