Men and Women because of their inherent physical differences are not equally suited for many tasks
Gender discrimination at work is one of the biggest hurdles faced by women as many people generalize their
opinion stating that "Women are not equally well suited for arduous tasks due to their inherent physical
differences are vague and require compelling reasons to satiate the claim mentioned.
In the Olden era around (1800.Bc) women are strictly restricted to step out of their homes. There is also a
the misconception that the bones of women are fragile when compared to men. thus they are restricted to kitchens,
to look after young toddlers thereby hindering their progress. This had happened due to the inferior
the complexity of the societies during pre-Medival periods discriminating against women from men as incompetent
and unworthy to carry out arduous mechanical works as men do. The first woman graduate Usha Murthy who
pursued her masters in prestigious ivy-league institutions like the Indian Institute of science had been
denied an offer to work on the top floor bay area in Tata industries this clearly is a sign of gender
discrimination at work.
But as of now after independence women are set free without bounds and are more welcomed into many arduous
works and equally treated well with that of a man, as a result of many women welfare societies who have
strived a lot for the welfare and progress of women present society has been changed tremendously. starting
from blue-collar jobs to manual jobs women are present in every field you mention? this is a great sign of
the development of a society isn't it so.as of a statistics report provided by a survey of India had
claimed that there are 60% of women who work in various fields and only 40% of men this clearly is an
indication of women is being employed in each and every sector and thus women empowerment has reached its
heights
Physical attributes may be differentiated from gender to gender. but their mental abilities, decision-making
skills supersede each other. This can be illustrated with an apt example as follows. Mary Kom who is a most
the renowned wrestler who has a backlog of medals awards and rewards in the Asian Olympics is a woman who had
defeated more than 100 men in the matches she won. thus it can be noted down that rather physical strength
mental capabilities self-confidence and will power can create miracles and make anyone reach flying colors in
their respective careers irrespective of gender inequality at work. and I strongly believe that the pain
women take to conceive her child is no way compared with the pain men put on their heads at work. Thus women
are a great force we cannot subsume or underestimate her capacities.
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- The following opinion was provided in a letter to the editor of a national aeronautics magazine Manned space flight is costly and dangerous Moreover the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites has demonstrated that a great deal 66
- Men and Women because of their inherent physical differences are not equally suited for many tasks 66
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, so, thus, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2299.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 449.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12026726058 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8019304474 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552338530067 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.544430357 60.3974514979 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.266666667 118.986275619 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9333333333 23.4991977007 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 26.0 4.97078651685 523% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 57.0 7.80617977528 730% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301720676107 0.243740707755 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907099598729 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965314401293 0.0758088955206 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726253883808 0.150359130593 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890399572439 0.0667264976115 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 14.1392134831 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.