Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house’s flat. Write a letter to your neighbors.
In your letter
• explain the reasons for the noise
• apologize
• describe what action you will take
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Neighbors,
I am writing this letter to apologize for the new problem which has come up from my apartment. Recently, I had received a letter from you which warned me for annoying noise of my accommodation.
As all you know, I have been moving to this apartment since a month ago but its condition was not suitable for living. There was a leakage under the tiles so that I had to repair it and renovate the house by changing tiles and repainting the walls.
I am so sorry because of bothering noise which comes from remodeling of apartment and I hope you accept my apologize. Dealing the circumstance in mind I trust that you will kindly understand this situation was out of my hand.
Please be assured that I will finish repairing which is the source of noise in three- or four-time’s day and I also will be in a fast pace to meet my promised deadline. During this period, I will forbidden working during rest hours includes between 1pm to 3 pm and after 9pm that your silence will not be interrupted by noise.
I look forward to receiving your response.
Best Regards,
Sahar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'forbid' or 'be forbidden'?
Suggestion: forbid; be forbidden
...ed deadline. During this period, I will forbidden working during rest hours includes betw...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57653061224 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67165287252 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627551020408 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6633713769 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237849594446 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086057367012 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517118892788 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124740511321 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457534634096 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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