Write a letter to your manager to request setting up a cafeteria for the staffs.
In your letter, you should tell:
• what you heard about the inconvenience from the staffs
• how you feel about it
• what suggestion you can give
Dear Sir,
I am writing to request for opening of the cafeteria in the office premises.
As we are not having any eating joint or cafeteria in the office are because of which staff members has to suffer, as they do not have any snakes or food facility available in the office. They are depending on the food cooked from the home, which cause problem to staff members. During the review meeting last month I have heard from the word of mouth that non availability of the cafeteria is the prime reason for the late reporting time of the staff in the office.
I really feel that opening of the cafeteria is the urgent requirement as it will help the employee to get fresh food. As it is old saying health is the biggest wealth, and eating fresh food at right time is vital for the healthy body.
The area of lawn is very large and the side area can be utilized for opening of the cafeteria, not only it will provide fresh food but also employment opportunities in the local area will increase and ultimately it will enhance our corporate image.
Hope to get the positive reply from you.
Thanking you
Yours faithfully,
Maninder Vadhrah
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... facility available in the office. They are depending on the food cooked from the home, which...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, really, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62621359223 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34968004713 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567961165049 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.1357556697 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.888888889 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185542805579 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868559160359 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608251107678 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918907551769 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507970258526 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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