Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?
it is the case that consequence between big salary and job satisfaction. while it is sometimes argued that high income is more crucial than a satisfying job. I am of the opinion that doing the job you love is a right way to take.
it can be said that a well-earned money is more important for some reasons. Firstly, social pressure always tends you to insane. In this modern life, people judge you by the way you look or how thick your wallet. Secondly, we need money to pay the bills and to respond our daily needs such as shopping, rent a house, food and beverage, etc. As that result, more and more people do a high-paid job - no matter how boring it is.
However, from my point of view that job satisfaction should be a top priority. The first reason for my argument is that job effective. you can do a job you do not like but when you are in a job which suits your strength, personality and you have interested in, the productivity will be increased significantly. Another reason is the motivation. To illustrate, Korean idols had a harsh practicing time (about from 1 to 10 years) before their debut. they had to practice at least 12 hours a day and strict criticizes from their trainers. Nevertheless, they love their job hence they did not give up and success in their career.
In conclusion, while it is true that salary is an indispensable part in our life, I believe that job satisfaction plays a more effective.
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- Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction Do you agree or disagree Provide relevant examples if necessary 61
- Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction Do you agree or disagree 61
- Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction Do you agree or disagree 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, while, at least, in conclusion, such as, by the way, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1167.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50579150579 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72067201497 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602316602317 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4565366371 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.9375 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345556870237 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970236957829 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777955784663 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208805559597 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610140777535 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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