dinosaurs endotherms
The speaker talks about why most scientists do not think the dinosaurs are endotherms despite the evidence stated in the passage.
First, though the dinosaur fossils were found in the polar regions of the present, the regions need not necessarily be as cold as they are today. Polar regions were warm or were warm enough for major parts of the year so that the dinosaurs were able to live there without being endotherms. And when the cold weather arrived, they must have migrated to warmer places or went into hibernation. This contradicts what has been stated in the passage that only endotherms would have survived such cold climates.
Second, though the dinosaurs have legs separated from the main body, they are not high energy consuming mammals like endotherms. Having legs separated from the main body was advantageous to the dinosaurs as such position can support large weights and especially, the dinosaurs grew to become heavy weight. This rebuts the claims made in the passage that the position and movement of the legs of the dinosaurs indicate that dinosaurs were endotherms.
Finally, the dinosaurs had Haversian canals in their bones. But, they also had growth rings around their bones. The presence of growth rings indicate that the dinosaurs grew rapidly during warm weather and their growth slowed down during cold weather. On the contrary, the endotherms would grow equally and rapidly in all seasons and the growth rings are not a characteristic of endotherms. Therefore, the dinosaurs were not endotherms and this is in contrast to what has been stated in the passage that the dinosaurs were endotherms because of the presence of Haversian canals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: HEAVY_WEIGHT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'heavyweight'?
Suggestion: heavyweight
...specially, the dinosaurs grew to become heavy weight. This rebuts the claims made in the pas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, second, so, therefore, in contrast, in contrast to, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1373.03311258 102% => OK
No of words: 274.0 270.72406181 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12773722628 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52678390474 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489051094891 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 419.4 419.366225166 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6000440639 49.2860985944 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.076923077 110.228320801 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 21.698381199 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06452816374 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402048143116 0.272083759551 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146653868264 0.0996497079465 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117940172456 0.0662205650399 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251708323208 0.162205337803 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674764943907 0.0443174109184 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 63.6247240618 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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