Smoking not only harms the smoker but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Smoking is a bad habit that is practiced by people all over the world. Since smoking can harm not only smokers but also non-smokers, many people want it to be banned in public places. I completely agree with prohibiting smoking in such areas and will explain why in this essay.
The most persuasive reason for a ban on smoking is because of the harm it causes on health. Since smoking can leave nicotine in the air which is a harmful substance, a non-smoker can inhale it. Inhaling nicotine can damage the lungs and levers and lead to health diseases such as cancer, heart disease, and asthma. If smoking is not banned in public places, then people who do not smoke will be exposed to toxic fumes and health risks. Therefore, non-smokers should not face this kind of threat when they are doing activities in public places.
Aside from the health risks smoking can possess, it can also damage the environment. As smoking can increase the amount of carbon-di-oxide in the environment, it will pollute the air. Since everyone is entitled to clean air, banning smoking is the best way to protect the environment. For example, In Bangladesh, smoking is prohibited in public places and if someone smokes at parks, beaches, or roads, he will be fined. Such a ban can curb the amount of smoking in public places and ensure compliance and protection for all.
To conclude, smoking should be banned in places like parks, beaches, public offices, public transportations, and roads in order to protect the health of non-smokers and save the environment from pollution. In my opinion, smoking has no place in areas open to public.
- Smoking not only harms the smoker but also those who are nearby Therefore smoking should be banned in public places To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Smoking not only harms the smoker but also those who are nearby Therefore smoking should be banned in public places To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, for example, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8381294964 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68146829976 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535971223022 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1282153601 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390001014832 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149741098094 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817494606751 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267420153547 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211501887763 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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