Some people argue that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others believe that it is better to try and improve such situations.
The difficulty acceptance level varies from human to human. Some individuals assert that it is better to accept the difficult circumstances, rather others are of the view that one should work hard to overcome such conditions. In this essay, I will discuss the view thoroughly. As far as my opinion is concerned, I tend to incline with the latter view.
To begin with, people than to find satisfaction in their worse situation, be it a financial crisis or unsatisfactory profession. The root cause behind this is, they do not have any other option but to survive in these unfavorable conditions. To illustrate, most of graduates and postgraduates face difficulty in finding a job that matches their higher studies and background and is often forced to work in unsatisfactory conditions and most prone to bullying. However, these people accept these circumstances just for the sake of money and survival.
On the flip side, working hard is a key to success and the only way to overcome such a condition. It will help in grabbing new opportunities in a professional career. The world is full of examples of the people who became successful by conquering difficult situations. For instance, Amitab Bachan, a most prominent hero of the Bollywood was once rejected by radio channel for his voice but he had not lost hope. Later on, ruled the Bollywood with his acting talent.
To conclude, in my opinion, although people accept difficult situations for their survival, in order to live a successful life, they should keep on doing hard work to overcome adverse conditions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the graduates') or simply say ''most graduates''.
Suggestion: most of the graduates; most graduates
... unfavorable conditions. To illustrate, most of graduates and postgraduates face difficulty in fi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04597701149 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98911478223 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613026819923 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8814147538 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0714285714 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160843760707 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451731598805 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490654381131 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089228657756 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290745867542 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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