Task 2
Online shopping has become popular recently. This will result in the end of high street shops.
To what extant do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays technologies are developing day by day as well as step by step. Especially the Internet plays an important role in our life. With the help of the Internet people can take any information which are they want to know. Such as watching films or TV shows anytime,searching recipes of meals,and the most common thing is that online shopping . This is because all of people can buy things online on the Internet. But as everything has pros and cons it has also some bad sides. Now, I try to explain one of them in my essay.
On one hand, online shopping is very useful. Since we can purchase anything as well as anytime. It offers us many facilities. For example whenever we need to go to somewhere,such as birthday part and we are hurry,at that time we must to buy a present.I consider that online shopping is the best way to find a way out. Because online shopping is more faster than others. And usually we can buy unique things which are not in the simple shops. Like mentioned qualities of buying online shopping are good sides of it.
On the other hand, if people get accustomed buying online,they never want to go to the high street shops. The reason behind this is that they count it requires extra actions. As wearing,going there by transport or on foot and others. But it is incorrect opinion. Usually people go to shopping malls they need to act and it is useful for their health. That is one side of the argument. The secondly,people will prefer online shopping more and more. After that street markets will need to close and some of their workers will become unemployed. Such kind of situations may damage the economy of the people.
In conclusion I can say that people should utilize online shopping in the period of necessity. Since they should go to street markets in order to stay healthy with the help of acting during to buy things by ownselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ne shopping in the period of necessity. Since they should go to street markets in ord...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63880597015 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5992146795 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531343283582 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6960285912 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.16 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.4 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190368837081 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512365621474 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583455087121 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116134162662 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395413254027 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 13.0946893788 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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