Students should pay the full cost for their own study, because university education benefits individuals rather than society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the problem of whether higher education will bring benefits for individuals or the community has been receiving a great number of public attention. Although individuals are not without advantages, the society is far more beneficial from the tertiary education.
It is believed that university education is only beneficial for students for some reasons. First, since students want to land a decent jobs later, having access to higher education and paying for the fees on their own are necessary. In fact, the environment of studying in university prepares for learners fundamental theories to do complex jobs like doctors or engineers which require deeper understanding of nature of subjects, thus making them become more competitive in labor markets. Second, by taking part in a wide range of activities in university, students are inclined to gain a whole new set of skills, such as problem-solving skill, logical thinking, cognitive thinking. This means that they are armed with soft skills to cope with a lot of problems, which is essential for their jobs in the future.
Nevertheless, a society with a vast number of accomplished postgraduates is valuable. Firstly, in order to boost the sustainable development of the whole community, it is undeniable that a decent educational system should be available for the majority of people without paying fully for their study. It is a testament that Finland provides the education program for almost all of students free of charge, which makes it easy to lower the barrier of illiteracy. Second, if the government funds for the education, every citizen are able to further their study, which helps the society have a lot of qualified employees. This means that these people are likely to help the society strengthen the workforce, which will bolster economic growth.
In conclusion, although students are not beneficial from university education, the society is more valuable. By investing in the tertiary education, the society will deal with a lot of relating issues.
- Sport is becoming a business with high income for professionals and more companies have involved in financial and in other ways It is a positive or negative development 78
- some people believe that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate people Discuss both views and give your opinions 78
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- Students should pay the full cost for their own study because university education benefits individuals rather than society To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Writing task 1 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, so, then, thus, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29411764706 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94404292451 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557275541796 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0068553778 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.142857143 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257436496199 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877374595265 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516309485769 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146313499049 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371917081056 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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