these days many families move abroad for work some people believe that this benefits the children in their families other believe that it make their lives more difficult discuss both views and give your opinion
these days many families move abroad for work some people believe that this benefits the children in their families other believe that it make their lives more difficult discuss both views and give your opinion
Some people argue that foreign countries are better places for job prospects to youngsters whereas other people contend that staying outside from mother land is difficult for immigrants. In this essay, I will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of migration of people to different countries.
On the one hand, youngsters are immigrating to other countries seeking for better job perspectives.
In parent countries, due to absence of job opportunities and inadequate salaries for their work compel youngsters to move abroad. For example, in India unemployment figures are dramatically rising by which most of the Indians have been migrating to other countries to search for lucrative jobs. Furthermore, infrastructure in developed countries is one step ahead and offers high remuneration to skill workers as compared to developing countries. Consequently, satisfactory wages and a fine lifestyle are the attributes which attract the young generation towards abroad.
On the other hand, the unpleasant conditions of a new country may put newcomers into difficult situations. Firstly, the environmental conditions might be unadaptable for a foreigner which may affect one's health mentally and physically. Secondly, sometimes the financial conditions of the young workers are not viable which develop difficult circumstances which may force immigrants into illegal activities. For instance, reports have shown that most immigrants are convicted in criminal activities to earn easy money and improve their economic state. The unfavourable settings make foreign workers difficult to adapt to in other countries.
Overall, it seems advisable that people should migrate to foreign countries for a better future if their parent country is unable to provide employment to their people and fails to provide infrastructure for public welfare.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72077922078 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00547653272 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561688311688 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.2980952257 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.538461538 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41549490462 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118704251578 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.185350144586 0.0667982634062 277% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260843860734 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.332585884955 0.056905535591 584% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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