Some people say that a person’s success is as a result of the way he has been brought up by his parents. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that an individual successful life is an outcome of his parents' principles and guidance whereas, some people argue that it is a result of his own hard work and perseverance. However, I agree with this viewpoint that a person writes his own story with struggle, own wisdom and winning attitude.
On this earth, almost everything is achieved by hard work and determination. This attitude pushes a person towards his goal as well as various mistakes made him/her skillful, rational and innovative. For example, history has evidence of great personalities which did not have rich backgrounds or without parents, become successful identities in different fields such as Cristiano Ronaldo, Steve Jobs and Bill Gates. Hence, the parents' guidance is secondary whereas hard work of an individual with his own decisions is vitally important.
Secondly, a kid born with a silver spoon may not explore as much as a kid with economic limitations can explore. The overprotective behaviour of their parents might not allow them to pursue his talent or hobby which he or she loves to perform. For instance, most of the singers and sports players are from poor backgrounds since different families train their children so that these professions do not match their standards. Thus, sometimes family principles or status would not allow a child to choose his own path.
Overall, it seems advisable that parents' upbringing is not certainly imperative to achieve any goal. However, the ungiven attitude towards your target is the main factor of a successful career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 428, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
..., Steve Jobs and Bill Gates. Hence, the parents guidance is secondary whereas hard work...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22134387352 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81325759306 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632411067194 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9082993637 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.083333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206603203467 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640764263614 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063540246168 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11721453427 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733971252161 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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